I will deconstruct your manuscript and look at the many parts that create the whole. I will show you and offer advice on how to correct problems. Full analysis of the manuscript will take the following into account:

  • Plot
  • Structure
  • Coherence
  • Continuity
  • Clarity
  • Point of View (POV)
  • Plausibility
  • Pacing
  • Character development
  • Setting
  • Description
  • Dialogue
  • Tone
  • Voice
     Do all your characters “sound” the same? Does the illiterate beggar use the vocabulary of a rocket scientist? Unless there is a plausible character trait that allows this, a beggar will have a different voice and word choice than a rocket scientist.
  • Word choice
  • Conflict/Tension/Suspense
    All stories have conflict/tension/suspense on some level.